Thoughts on a "Good Narrative"

1. My narrative involves the reader in the story by giving a large amount of introductory detail, like the setting and what was going on at the time.
2. In my narrative I relate events in sequence by introducing them in chronological order of how they happened.
3. In my narrative I include a detailed observation of the people, places, and settings of the different parts through out my narrative, like the play ground and the hospital.
4. I my narrative I include important changes through out the story, I describe the tensions and conflicts through out the story, like when they moved me to a different hospital bed.
5. I tell the story in my point of view through out the narrative.
6. I focus on past events, like pain, and discomfort through out my narrative and relate on the connection between past and present, and how I would never want anyone to have to go through it.
7.  I created a main point or idea through out the story of it being the worst pain I have ever experienced, physically and emotionally.