Wednesday, February 29, 2012

Why I Want a Wife Response

1.  I believe that the thesis is implied in the first paragraph of the story.

2.  The effect of the repetition is that you really know that she wants a wife.

3.  I do not believe that she wants this wife, I think that she wants to become this type of wife, and want everyone to know what she has to go through everyday.

4.  She organizes the different things about being a wife in an order that makes sense. She sort of creates the ideal image of a wife, although it seems like how a regular wife would be it seems completely outrageous that all these tasks could be completed with no problems.

5.  I admire the values in your essay about how the ideal wife should be.  I consider your essay to be both effective and pursuasive.  Good Job.

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